enterVOID: Ru match 4a

sayang! angganda nung concept talaga!
kita ko yung approach na ni-ta-try mo eh yung mala-primetime tv shows kung saan throughout it eh me nagna-narrate.
Yun nga lang ang naging weakspot neto, yung ganung style kasi eh masaya kung talagang...marunong kang "maglaro" dun sa deliveries ika nga. okey naman yung grammar eh, tama naman, hindi nga lang kasi inviting in a way na nagpatalun-talon yung ideas...if i can say it in english; it's correct, but it looks like its not trying to be THAT interesting enough. Really work on that.

besides that? ayos na eh! kaya ako nagiging critical todits kasi ayus na eh, dun sa drawing mismo eh, ika nga, pag tinganggal mo yung mga speech balloons and whatnot eh masaya syang tingnan, malinaw yung establishment nung scene, okey yung flow from panel to panel, tapos decent yung hierarchy ( style ) nung art. Tapos inggit nga din ako kasi kaya mong gawing napaka reader-friendly nung mga komiks mo ( yung hindi ba naliligaw yung readers kung anong sunod na panel yung titingnan ) Plus, angganda nung cover art, wow...well, as always, di ba?

oo yun lang, thumbs up ako dito, kaya nga ni fave eh.



hm, mukhang bawat deviants na pinupuntahan ko ngayon eh gigugulo ko? oh well, tatapusin ko parin yung pinapagawa mo, think of it as a "what if?" addition na lang. XD